tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9060969609159778725.post2338601537042402561..comments2020-08-23T16:18:59.853+12:00Comments on Bethan @ Pt England School: Summer Learning Journey, week 3, Day 4, Activities 1,2,3Pt England Blogs Administrator 2014Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07845137228130364482noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9060969609159778725.post-46040617095960952552019-01-31T09:49:53.126+13:002019-01-31T09:49:53.126+13:00Hi there Bethan,
My name is Susie and I am a memb...Hi there Bethan,<br /><br />My name is Susie and I am a member of the Summer Learning Journey (SLJ) team just like Billy. I really enjoyed reading your summary of 'The Seven Stars of Matariki'. It is obvious that you've taken your time to focus on the details. Anyone who does not know about the story will be able to learn about the origins of the seven stars by reading your description.<br /><br />Did you ever read this book at school? I'm sure you have created something that relates to Matariki as a way of celebrating the Maori New Year. I would love to hear all about your learning experience! I remember I once used this book for an art lesson where we created a jigsaw puzzle that represented the seven stars.<br /><br />Keep up the good work and I look forward to hearing back from you,<br /><br />Susie :) Susie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08123453658557161038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9060969609159778725.post-79338604076251782382019-01-30T09:16:23.925+13:002019-01-30T09:16:23.925+13:00HI Bethan
Love all the post you have done you are...HI Bethan<br /><br />Love all the post you have done you are doing very well in the summer learning journey can't wait to see you when school starts again. <br /><br />I agree with you about the cloud it does look like a spinning top and a ladies hat upside down and a marichi. those choices are really creativty you can really let you imagination run wild Bethan!<br /><br />I also like you acrostic poem you have right loads of words like a sentence instead of a word which I sometime think is quite lazy but when you right sentence it make me feel like the writer has put in quite a lot of work.<br /><br />Cheers<br />ZaeedaZaeedahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04555397425107452119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9060969609159778725.post-68534291050950446822019-01-28T06:39:29.413+13:002019-01-28T06:39:29.413+13:00Hello again Bethan, thanks for comparing this clou...Hello again Bethan, thanks for comparing this cloud to a UFO or even a spinning top. It certainly looks very similar! Have you noticed any strange looking clouds before? <br /><br />I'm living in London at the moment where it seems to be cloudy a lot of the time. It's mostly overcast though so unfortunately I haven't seen any funky looking clouds lately, maybe in the summer time.<br /><br />Thanks, Billy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15645088588780464837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9060969609159778725.post-87033576005739232272019-01-27T10:00:43.954+13:002019-01-27T10:00:43.954+13:00Hey there Bethan, it's Billy here again from t...Hey there Bethan, it's Billy here again from the Summer Learning Journey team. I'm glad to see you've been working really hard over your summer break and completing lots of activities. You've been incredibly active and I am sure your teachers at school will be really proud of your efforts.<br /><br />I really enjoyed reading your acrostic poem the Southern Lights. I like that you didn't just write one word per line. You've also used some creative language such as 'grand movements', 'awestruck faces'. I like the alliteration in 'tangling together'. <br /><br />Do you often write poetry? You're quite talented. What's your favourite form of poetry?<br /><br />Thanks, Billy.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15645088588780464837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9060969609159778725.post-23873234702547139232019-01-23T16:28:13.913+13:002019-01-23T16:28:13.913+13:00Kia Ora Bethan
What great work you have here! I l...Kia Ora Bethan<br /><br />What great work you have here! I love how you have set your work to a high standard and I am really impressed. The work you have done is awesome Bethan. Your acrostic poem was really beautiful. I loved the words you have chosen for the activity. My favourite bit was tangling together like a synchronised dance! You really thought through what you were going to write and I think it's fantastic Bethan!<br /><br />Overall great job on finishing your work and I definitely hope to see more posts from your amazing blog!<br /><br />Cheers,<br />AmeliaAmeliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04254981597315938952noreply@blogger.com