Thursday, 3 March 2016

Retelling The Three little Pigs.

Walt: Retell a story

The Three Little Pigs.


Once upon a time there were three little pigs. They went out to find a good place to build there homes,“Beware of the big bad wolf” warned their mother. When they found the perfect place to build their own homes, they set to work.

The first little Pig built his house out of straw. The second little pig built his house out of sticks, a bit better then the first one. The third little pig built his house out of bricks and cement, his was the strongest of all the houses. While he was working he said to himself, “The big bad wolf will never get me.”

When the 1st little pig finished his house he did not know he was being spied on by the big bad wolf. The big bad wolf was very hungry and he wanted a pig for dinner. So he went to the first house Knocked and said, “little pig, little pig may I come in.”  He noticed him at once, he replied, “not by the hair of my chiny chin chin.” So The big bad wolf blew his house down, and the 1st little pig ran to his brother’s house. The Big Bad Wolf knocked on the door of the 2nd house and said “little pig, little pig may i come in.” He also replied, “not by the hair of my chiny chin chin.” So The big bad wolf blew his house down, and they Ran to their brothers house of bricks.

The Big Bad Wolf knocked on the door once more and said “little pig, little pig may i come in.” He also replied, “not by the hair of my chiny chin chin.” So The big bad wolf tried to blow his house down, but it did not budge. The Big bad wolf Climbed up the chimney. But there was Boiling water at the bottom and he fell in. Finally the three little pigs lived happily ever after.



The End.

Task Description: We watched 4 videos and then started to rewrite.

2 comments:

  1. Darling - I notice you wrote there homes and then a sentence later it was their own homes. 'their' is correct in that context because it means 'belonging to' their bananas, their things, well as there is talking of it's location - over there... the big bad wolf went over there to blow their houses down. It's a tricky one my darling but practise makes perfect - Good girl!!

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    1. Thanks mum next time I will make sure I it is Right.

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